Hey it could use some work.
But it's not bad!
Neither is your review!
that was very.... random
I liked it, even though apparently it's going crazy, but i can tell it's going to be great when you fix it, or whatvr.
yeah i have to agree
It was the best newb flashes iv seen today, yet, it seemed you got sloppy after the middle half.
It was a very well written story, I loved it alot. Although the ending might have been more powerfull if it lasted longer. But it was still an amazing short.
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